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Forbidden Love Prologue by ~Brokenhearted411:iconBrokenhearted411:



                   My name is Evilyn Elizabeth Laura. I am fifteen years old and in love. The guy I have fallen so hard for, is smart, funny, kind, loving, caring, sexy; overall amazing. We met online and after six months decided to meet. But instead of a fairy-tale meeting, I got something completely unexpected, my brother.
©2008-2009 ~Brokenhearted411
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just another idea... tell me if u think i should continue or not

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:iconrikkuyuffienamine:
I think you should continue, the story sounds as if it would be very interesting. I would gladly read it =)

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WTF?!
:iconbrokenhearted411:
thanks i guess will then

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"I swore never to be silent whenever and wherever human beings endure suffering and humiliation. We must always takes sides. Neutrality helps the opressor, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented."
-Elie Wiesel
:iconstrangeaussie:
i think it would be a really good story, but it's quite similar to another one you've got going... as a brother/sister slash though i think it could become a really interesting story! plan it and see how you feel =)

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I'm not a stalker, I just follow you around all day.




...by the way, you're out of milk...

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~frerardislove ~ ~WritersGroup
:iconbrokenhearted411:
yeah i know, i'm just not sure where to love or not to love is going

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"I swore never to be silent whenever and wherever human beings endure suffering and humiliation. We must always takes sides. Neutrality helps the opressor, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented."
-Elie Wiesel
:iconclonqui:
OMG! this could be very good depends how you develope it but i think you should could continue cuz it sound :sing: Awesome!

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What's in your wallet?
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YOU CAN'T RUSH PERFECTION!
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I have grammar errors get with it :D
:iconbrokenhearted411:
thank you.... i will as soon as i get over my writer's block

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"I swore never to be silent whenever and wherever human beings endure suffering and humiliation. We must always takes sides. Neutrality helps the opressor, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented."
-Elie Wiesel
:iconclonqui:
oh no! please tell me youre kidding about the writers block right?

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What's in your wallet?
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YOU CAN'T RUSH PERFECTION!
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I have grammar errors get with it :D
:iconstrangeaussie:
then try this one for a bit and see what happens! i think it could be really great! and unusual slashes are always interesting... good luck! :shamrock:

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I'm not a stalker, I just follow you around all day.




...by the way, you're out of milk...

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~frerardislove ~ ~WritersGroup
:iconbrokenhearted411:
no i got a brain fart late yeterday and it won't pass

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"I swore never to be silent whenever and wherever human beings endure suffering and humiliation. We must always takes sides. Neutrality helps the opressor, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented."
-Elie Wiesel
:iconbrokenhearted411:
thanks ill try it

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"I swore never to be silent whenever and wherever human beings endure suffering and humiliation. We must always takes sides. Neutrality helps the opressor, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented."
-Elie Wiesel

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